Hi Dee ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a fun poem, dear author! It made me smile.

I remember this prompt. And I think that you have done an excellent job with it. This poem is lighthearted, and makes the reader smile, because I'm sure that many people are familiar with Googling something and then coming up with something completely unexpected! It also shows the differences in sense of humour that people can have.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. It has a nice rhythm and flow. I like your use of punctuation, as this helps guide the reader and assists the overall clarity of the piece. Good job!

Suggestions:

I do have a couple of suggestions. I hope that you will find them helpful!

Stanza 2:

In line three, I think that "laugh" should be "laughed".

General suggestion:

I suggest allowing the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. This would perfect the overall clarity and reading experience.

My Rating:

This is a fun piece. I enjoyed the read.

I did have a couple of suggestions, though one is more of a matter of personal preference. I will give this item a rating of 4.5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .