Hi Beautiful Candy ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a sweet poem, dear Candy. It made me smile.

First of all, I have to say that you used a very interesting form. I hadn't heard of it before, so I was glad to see the explanation. It looks like a lot of fun, and I'll definitely have to try it sometime!

As to the content of the poem, I thought that it's really cute. To have someone you can turn to whether you're happy or sad, no matter what, is very special. Someone to cry with, eat ice cream with, scream with, whatever. A true friend, and perhaps more - a team that sticks together forever. It's what we all want, I think.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. As said, I like the form. It has a great rhythm and flow, and a nice presentation. You've done a great job with it.

Suggestions:

I would like to see some punctuation, like commas, and a period at the end of each sentence. I think that that would assist the overall clarity.

My Rating:

A lovely poem that was a joy to read, thank you!

I did have one suggestion, but that's more of a personal preference. So, I will still give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .