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 Happiness Open in new Window. [E]
The path to real happiness is simpler than it may seem
by Edward Grey Author Icon
Review of Happiness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A pleasant hour!!Edward Grey Author IconMail Icon *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the newbies Section of WDC, I pick it because the given title is very interesting to me.
Every one always like to know and curious where we will find happiness.
And we always have our own unique opinion on it, because each one have its own range of contentment-in which it links to happiness.
You have a good start in beginning this good article of yours, you already hook me on the first paragraph by using words that is comprehensible and stating the things that might think most in general people think about happiness.
Then smoothly showing in the second and third paragraph in stating some facts where we might get happiness. I like also that you give an example of a song lyric that will give a enhancing appeal to your reader specially if the song is familiar, because everyone likes music.
Until I reach the ending part where you already stated your own opinion, which is true and you have also the point about happiness or satisfaction. Well Done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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