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The Gift of Prayer Open in new Window. [E]
Hurricane Matthew harmed the Eastern seaboard last weekend. We are glad it wasn't worse.
by Jay O'Toole Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found this new piece of yours in your portfolio, and the given title is very captivating, We always blessed with abundance gift when we Pray, its the only communication that is free,unlimited and yet it makes the impossible to be possible.
I always heard some miracle in prayers and I believe in that, reading this piece of yours gave me a thought that there is a miracle that goes while having this devastating hurricane, because Thank God you are all safe after this calamity. I really like the rhyme and rhythm created while reading it, its not been forced and it flows natural.
the meter of words are in exact and order also. Its so great when it read aloud, and have some tongue twisting. Well Done Teacher!

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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