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Vandal Eyes Open in new Window. [13+]
The Confessions of a Tagger
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Review of Vandal Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This gives me an impression of something dark, maybe because of word vandal you used in the title, but I pick it because there is a good reflection that I see when you mixed the word eye.

*Star* The title as well as the body is important to a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

And as I ponder the created lines, it gives a smooth and vivid imagery.
There are words that its hard for me to grasp but by mixing it with ordinary words it is balance.
There is its dramatic flow, it helps by using enjambment form or poetry.
Great work!

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations! *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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