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A pleasant hour!!Phil G Author IconMail Icon *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose Author IconMail Icon, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece in Sisco's Newbies Contest, I pick it to have a read and give my review, because the given title is some kind of amusing, and it reminds me also a memory of what will might my worst day ever too.
And as I expecting and impression this will align to the comedy genre, though the experience is funny but also fun, and you amuse me. Its in the form of narrating, because I didn't find any dialogue. But you did it well in narrating it.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, this is in the first person point of view so I will not comment for not using any dialogue, in which dialogue for me is one of the sparkling or enhancing part of a piece, because it makes the character moves.
The Awardicon deserves well Congratulations!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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