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A pleasant hour!!pbcurtis1287 *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose Author IconMail Icon, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found this piece of yours on Sisco's Newbies Contest, I pick it for a review because it gives an interesting impression, though its some kind of dark but i would like to find out.

*Star* The title is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

This is a very interesting story being in the shoe of a killer, you did great in achieving and portraying its character as well as personality. Strong emotions is being held and you clasp and hold the breath of your reader hook and continue to follow the next scene. Great one!

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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