I am also judging your item as a judge at the "The Bard's Hall Contest" .
Ahhh, humanoids, steam and an action adventure all spin the gears wonderfully to bring this story to us. We are enthralled by every gadget, each turn and twist and the creepiness woven within.
Very well done! Thank you for entering the contest, even though it was one of the challenges over at The Wodehouse Challenge. You did a great job with the horror-steamy prompt.
Until next time--write on!
You last responded to this review 10/30/2016 @ 9:51pm EDT
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