Azrael Tseng,

It is no wonder that you win so many contests, my friend. You are a very talented author and deserving of those wins.

The plot is original, at least to me, and very well crafted. The pace of the story moved from one point to the next at the appropriate speed.

The two protagonists, Grigor and Francois were personable and the reader began to empathize with them. The dialogue was appropriate and helped to move the story from beginning to end.

There wasn't anything not to like about this story. It is a pleasure to read a story that is articulate and full of imagery.

I would love to have you write a story for either of my two contests: the Paranormal Romance Short Story contest or the Spiritual Fiction Short Story contest. Please, give it a thought.

Thank you for offering this wonderful story.


Jim

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .