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 She is Too Much Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about her.
by scottdaniel Author Icon
Review of She is Too Much  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your poem "She is Too Much" Open in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window.

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good romantic poem. I like its simplicity.

*BurstP* THE POEM: The main image is wonderful. Yes, love should be expressed that way.
Your poem has beautiful romantic thought woven inside every line. It seems you wrote this from personal experience. You told beautifully about your deep and meaningful love to her.

*BurstP* FAVORITE LINES: “The stars have shifted
And I find my way.
I get lost and found again
Day after day.“

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn'find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I feel your poem is positive.

I enjoyed it reading.Keep writing!

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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