Hi, i'm Mary Ann MCPhedran, and thank for sharing yor item with me for reviewing.

First impression a well and interesting topic which has life details of your ancestor, I can relate to your story with similar experiences, I'm trying find my routs in Ireland, as I believe that I'm from Irish descent. So far I have discovered my great grandfather but Scottish born.

You have structured your item witha well designed with an and detailed scripted penmanship, and displaying your findings in easy to read and understand storyline.

I found no distractions of bad grammar or spelling and needs no suggestuon of changes to the item
I found parts of the story funny, and I can imagine you as a a cheroki woman standing with your pipe between your teeth just like your ancestors.LOL. But you are not like your predessors, your our fine princess on WDC.

Ienjoyed reading your item ad found it a great written item which held my attention all the way to the end.

Overal: A well written decripted story, and found no reason for critic.






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