Hi item for thank you for sharing your item for review.
First impression lik the flow of this poem.
and it has good imagery and good storyline

The poem has a sad topic can you imagine not being allowed to fall in love, I don't think any woman or man would like this.

looked at your words twice to check for distractions and found none you have written the poem with good rhyming pattern, designing, and creation in your *tremendous inspiration.

I found no need to suggest changes and enjoyed all of the poem.


Thank you for sharing with me Mary Ann MCPhedran




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