Hi,
I'm Mary Ann MCPhedran and I review with River's review group.

impression you have written a well descipted account of yor item and it has detailed information of your storyline.

The story has great imagery and you have structured the item with good designed layout

Your story displays the frustration youare going through my only critic here is not to look back in the past Go forwardwriteabout the good things, especially the new bith you are waiting to arrive

YourUtem is written with good flow and the pressentation is good I was drawn to the item with the tittle andit kept me intrested to the end.

I have found no distractions and I foud no grammaror spelling mistakes This item is good and I look forword to reading more of your work. Keep writing and good luck with the new arrival into your family.

Overall I found your item a good read and interesting story, with detailed account of family life and a joy to read keep writing

Mary Ann MCPheran 21/4/2018.


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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .