This is a Newbies + Poetry Group Review

This is an OPEN HOUSE review

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Hello Legendary Mask.

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest


A short but wonderful poem about nature. I could see the story unfolding as I read this piece. It is full of imagery. Made me wish I was there.

The flow and rhythm work well to make this a good poem. Each line flows nicely into the next line.

Listen to the voices of the turtles
they're saying that we will be one together.
I love these lines. I never thought about listening to turtles.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann



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