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 A Hoarse Horse of Course Open in new Window. [E]
For the kids.
by JESykes Author Icon
Review by Rebecca Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hi: My name is Rebecca, I will be reviewing your story:

I will give you my honest review, please remember that you are the best judge of what's right for your story.


Hooks: the title is what caught my attention.



Overall Impression: this is good. funny,



My Favorite part:Unless he sings in Morse
Code - of course



My final thoughts: this is a funny little poem, glad I read it today I needed a smile. good job.












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