Hi, and thank you for sharing your story with me I can relate to your story in many ways, I have a little quote that I often use Ask and you will receive, ' for instance when I'm going out I check my handbag before I go out, and I can't find my purse I panic because I'm running late or think I have lost it and I say
'Please God help me find it. ' and it appears on the floor or by the bedside table. So yes I can understand your nephew asking and receiving. You have written this story beautifully and eith a descripted format with information easy to read. Your story is well structured and has good imagery. I found no errors in grammar and spelling, but please reproof read as I'm not an expert at punctuation. I enjoyed reading your story, which kept me interested all the way to the end.
OVERALL A well written story with great imagery and storyline
needs no suggestion of change as there are no distractions. keep writing job we done. MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN A MEMBER OF REVIEWING WITH RIVER.


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