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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Ray!
I know you don't mention how old you are, but I have to say that you are a really talented writer (especially for how old I presume you to be by your photo), and I don't say that to too many people. This piece once again shows your talent.
The odd thing about this is that it's a lot like mine. Freedom is what makes this country great, not some lunatic dictator that thinks his MAGA hat is going to make it great just because he thinks can change the world his warped visions.
What hit home for me in this was your use of the bullet holes in the wall and those writings on it. That says a lot, and it makes this piece shine.
Your ending was also a little similar to mine, but I love how you told it. What's stranger yet is that our stories are quite short, yet they both referred to the same things concerning the president in their own unique ways.
Very well done, my friend! You now have a new fan!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Ray! Have a wonderful day and...

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

Goliath With A Santa Hat On



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