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 | Alone  [13+] The lone wolf... is not always alone by choice.  |
| (4.5)| Hi there, DancesInAshes! This is a sad piece, and unfortunately its also true when it comes to Nature. And not just wolves either, but probably a lot of other animals, whether they roam in packs or not. You did a really nice of telling this. It reminded me of the commentary a Natural Geographic program might put on showing wildlife as it really it is-it was that good! That line about the howling at the moon particularly stood out! Well done, DIA, but I did spot one tiny niggle: '...but slowly saw it's family leave' (its) Otherwise, BRAVO! Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your biography set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PSS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" to get a feel of Writing.Com and introduce yourself to the community!
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