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Given: Dec 19, 2018 at 2:56pm
Length: 1,191 Characters |
759 w/o WritingML
Hello there, Sugar Cube! I've read one of your pieces before (Santa's Bell from A Box of Weeds), and this one is just as dark as twisted as that one! I love it! You did a great job of easing the reader into who was narrating this, although it doesn't take long for us to figure out it's a robot of some kind, or to be more specific, Alexa! And to personify her the way you did was purrfect! (Get it? Purrfect? ) Talk about one demented cat person! A shoulder wrap? I'm guessing that's a purse, right? And a necklace? I'm not a big cat person, but even I wouldn't go that far! Excellent piece, Sugar Cube! You now have a new fan! Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and...
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