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| (4.5)| Hello there, Gestalt1! I like this. You did a great job of comparing those voices in your head to stones being thrown through the windows of your mind, but you're content with them because 'A broken window never hurt anyone' (nice). But then you go on to say that the new replaced window panes aren't as good as the old ones. In other words, your mental barriers aren't as strong as they once they were. Well done, my friend. I'm hardly an expert on poetry (mainly cuz I don't understand it most of the time!  ), but I really did enjoy this one (because I COULD understand it!).Kee ponw ritin gon, Gestalt1, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your biography set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PSS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" to get a feel of Writing.Com and introduce yourself to the community!
PSSS-If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Please Review Page or The Plug Page under Community on the left hand side. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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