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 PLAY TIME Open in new Window. [E]
Just a fun time with words
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Brokenwords!
Well, I don't think you were 'broken' when you wrote this!
This is good. Making all those phrases rhyme with the same 'aye' sound couldn't have been too easy, but you pulled it off, and you even did it in 'way' that made sense and gave us some good advice.
Well done, my friend!
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