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Review #4458747
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         Review for entry/chapter: "🏆Bonnie" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Howdy, Jennifer!
This is cool. I like how you used those prompt words, and the idea of a little old lady strolling into a church and with a guitar slung over her shoulder was a great concept! I can just picture the faces of the church patrons as she 'got down' and made that guitar sing!
I also enjoyed how Bonnie was so mysterious since she left the church without a real explanation. But then again, 'this' isn't all that misunderstood: she just needed to get it out of her system and let those folks know that she could still do it!
Great spelling and telling, but I did spot one tiny niggle:
“I’m Bonnie(”,) she offered to the group...' (,")
Kee ponw ritin gon, Jennifer! I can see why this won the contest! Congratulations!

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