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Seasons greetings, Sherri!
For a short FF piece, I thought this was good. I'm a fan of everything dark and mysterious, and having Karalynn stranded there in the middle of nowhere where her colleague sent her (even though she ended up 10 miles away from he originally directed her) was a good concept. And better still was that 'light being' approaching her and telling her to decide for herself what it was. Reminds me of Close Encounters of the 3rd Kind!
Dane seems rather mysterious with his answers to Karalynn's questions, almost rude if you ask me, but I think that's how you wanted to portray him.
Well done, my friend. My only suggestion, should you decide to, would be to expand on this at a later date.
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and good luck in the contest!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

Goliath With A Santa Hat On



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