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 Anxiety Open in new Window. [E]
A short poem about dealing with anxiety
by Lou123 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Seasons greetings, Lou!
For one of your first pieces on here I thought this was good. And if it really something you suffer from, then you have my sympathy.
What I enjoyed most about this was your prose; it seemed professional, and you told us how it affects you by entering through the mind, and how it has a name but no physical appearance, which is true of a lot of psychological maladies. But that's not to say they can't be cured.
As I said, this is a very telling piece about a person who has anxiety, and I've seen anxiety attacks before in public.
I have/had/have agoraphobia (sometimes it worse than others), and that's not too different from anxiety. At one point I couldn't even walk into a WalMart without freaking out, and some days I don't even want to leave my house. The thought of being in a room filled with strangers or in a large crowd is scary!
Anyway, nice job, Lou!
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