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So you don't want to share your brain power, Only kidding. Thanks for sharing your story. I can relate to agreeing with you about memory, but I have only long term memory. But if I'm going to the bedroom to collect an object I can't remember what I had to do when I arrive at the bedroom. It's the same with conversations, if I'm talking to someone my memory goes blank in the middle of the conversation and I have to ask what I was saying.
I write a lot about my childhood,
You have written your item well and have good conversation of the subject. The item has good storyline and imagery. I was drawn to the tittle and the story was of interest to me and I chose to read. The item can relate to half the planet on this article of brain power, and most of the senior citizens forget from time to time, but not of being a serious problem .
I like the lay out and the display of your item it is easy to read. I enjoyed reading your item and found no reason to suggest changes. Overall, A well written and interesting story. Mary Ann MCPhedran a member of reviewing with River



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