Hi, what a place to end I had goose bumps, as I was reading and then I will have to wait until the next chapter. You have written another good and well penned of your romantic love story. I like the suspense and the guessing game you're playing with your readers. This is a good way to draw the attention to your written work, and I can't wait for next episode.

The design and the display is well laid out, and is written in a scripted detailed account of the story and is easy to read. The item has good imagery and you have my mind running wild wondering why your husband is at the desk?. Another twist in the tale.
I have no preference of a favourite line, because I like all of the story.
I found no reason to suggest changes because of bad grammar or spelling errors, NO edit needed.
Overall impression a great write and imagery. you have left your readers wondering, Well done; a joy to read. Mary Ann MCPhedran a member of reviewing with River.










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