Thank you for sharing with me your short piece, but the item has a well written topic that says volumes in the written word. I like the style of the
short piece plain no fancy form is well penned so it can be read well. The item has good image and blends well with the criteria of the story line. The item has no errors in bad grammar or spelling. of the story but reproof as I'm no expert on punctuation, A vision of colour is described [n the line about the plats and I like this.. The story was drawn to me by the by reading the tittle and I was curious and read on to the end. Thank you for reminding me of spring but we here in the UK have still winter to come.
Overall impression An item that is small is well written and a good read. A joy to read and keep writing. This review was reviewed by MARY ANN MCPhedran. A member of reviewing with River group.
A job well done, and displayed well.

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