Thank you for sharing with me your story poem. I enjoyed reading the item The story around the poem is interesting and kept my interest all the way to the end. The item has been written and easy to read. I enjoyed the read.

The item I came across looking for something to read, Sometimes I do this go browsing, LOL. I was interested and here I am reviewing. I like the layout and the way you have structured your item. I found no reason to suggest changes in the item because of bad grammar or spelling I found none. I would reproof read and not take my word, I'm no expert on punctuation.

I have no preference to a favourite line as I like it allThe imagery and the storyline blend well together and fit the criteria of topic of the story poem.

Overall impression a well written story poem and has good imagery and blends well with the topic. a good write and a joy to read. No need for changes. MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN.A member of reviewing with River.









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