Hello, and thak you for sharing your poem with me. I was drawn to the poem by reading the tittle. 'Broken Pen' a lovely name for a poem The words express the written item well. I think it's a story poem and your drifting apart from a relationship. I t maybe a pen you used before you became a successful writer, but either way you express the words beautifully.

The design of the written expression is displayed in an easy to read foremat, and the verses are structured in a descripted storyline of the meaning of the story.

The item has great imagery, who would have thought of a tittle such as this one, WELL DONE, it's a wonderful title.

I found no errors in spelling or grammar,but I always
suggest you reproof as I'm no expert on punctuation.

I have enjoyed reading your poem and hope to see your name in future items for reviewing. Keep up the good work good luck with your writing.

Overall impression, a well written item with good read and expression.
MARY ANN MCPHEDRAN a member of reviewing with River.
about 190 words.



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