Hi, and thank you for sharing with me. I like the way you have penned the scri cribed the scenes on the beach. A well written story.

I like the design and the way you have structured the item in an easy to read format.

I was looking for a story to read and I came across your item, I decided to read it and kept me interested all the way to the end.

I found no spelling or grammar errors, but I suggest you reproof and don't just take my word for it as Im no expert on punctuation. I have no need to suggest changes.

I enjoyed reading your item and the imagery on the beach blended well with the descripted passage and fits the criteria of the story.

Ihave no preference to a favourite line as I liked all of the story.
Overall impression a well written story with a descriptive storyline and a joy to read.
keep writing.
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MARY ANN MCPEDRAN.
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