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Hi there, Kiernan!
This is a nice little humorous piece about woman who's not ashamed of getting caught in rather ridiculous spots, and being able to show her humility to others about it is a good trait. A lot of people would have been so embarrassed they would have ran out of the room screaming (especially if it made headlines!).
As I said, I did enjoy this, but there's quite a few grammar niggles in it, mainly dealing with comma placement. The spelling was good though, and the story was legible.
One thing that really stood out was the spacing between words and commas.
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