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| (3.5)| Hi there, Romaine! This isn't bad for your first piece on here, and I can relate to what you're saying. We do live in a world of chaos, especially with how technology is advancing these days. And I completely agree with you about 'empty verbiage and clusters of voices' everywhere we turn. One thing that really irks me is that people don't really talk to each other anymore. They can just pick up their cell phones and text them a message or get on Facebook, but that's not like talking to someone face to face. They said this new technology would be bring us closer together, but I think it's doing just the opposite! You have a few misspellings and grammar niggles in this, Romaine, but otherwise, well said! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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