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 Procrastination Open in new Window. [E]
A short poem on never postponing work for another day..
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Gocreate!
This is neat, even though it's about something I hate about myself.
I like how you wrote this. I'm no expert on poetry (mainly because I don't understand half the time), but from what I can see you didn't stick to any strict poetry rules with this. Yes, the words rhyme well in some of the stanzas, but it felt more like you were just trying to get your meaning out, and that's exactly what you did.
I wake a lot of mornings saying I need to get this done before the day is done, and then it's noon, and then it's dusk, and then it's the next morning again! Aaaaarrrgghh!
What's tearing me up lately is I'm trying to write a novel, and I've been stuck on the 2nd chapter for the last two months! It's just a small piece, but I can't seem to get the way I want it. I know I should just skip over it and come back to it later, but I don't work that way. I think I'm going to have to learn that way though, otherwise, this book ain't never gonna get wrote!
Well done, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon (I know I'm going to try to!), thanks for sharing this, and have a great day!
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