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Hello there, Androgynous!
This is different, but I like your take on what you consider a ghost might be.
Indeed, some of us tend to blame other things for our own faults, even claiming that they were acts of a supernatural entity (although this is kind of rare, from what I see). But on the flip side, there's also a lot of things that happen that can't be explained, and I'll be the first one to testify to that!
I've watched things fall over in my house that shouldn't have fallen over. I've heard things in my house that didn't make sense. And I saw my mother as a bright light in a room where there was no other light 6 months after she died.
So do I believe in ghosts? What do you think?
Sorry, I digress.
As I said, I like your own take on this phenomenon, but I was a little confused by the ending. Just what exactly do mean by the 'right road'?
Anyway, this was good. Different, but good.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Androgynous, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! (by the way, I know rejection can be tough, but DoubleDay is a pretty large publisher, so don't let getting turned down hit you so hard. As you said, that was a long time ago!)
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