Hello Words Whirling 'Round ,

Thanks for sharing your writing with us. This review is for "a very Wodehouse challenge" .

You have a way with your word choices to express how insignificant we are and Earth really is in the big picture of the entire galaxy. There are many planets within our own 'area' of the universe and who knows what else beyond that. I really liked the reference of our galaxy as a fragment. I think that captures the feeling that many of us have when we stare up at the stars at night. Like we're just a fragmented piece of an already fragmented machine.

The poem has an ABCB rhyming scheme that is fairly consistent throughout, though there are a couple lines that last a beat too long or are just slightly short in syllable count which throws the rhythm off in those areas.

Overall, I like your choice of language throughout and I think you conjured up some great imagery. Good work!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .