Hi buzzlite,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about somethings going on that you hate but are dealing with. I try to take everything in my stride and not let things bother me. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. Yo have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.