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 The Heroic Heart  [ASR]
The legend of a family curse on love could not dissuade them.
by ๐ŸŒ• HuntersMoon
Review of The Heroic Heart  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "The Heroic Heart" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the seventh stanza.

My Favorite Part: The seventh stanza is my favorite because with a gentle touch and true love's kiss he once more made her whole.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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