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He Thought For a Moment He Was Rich  [13+]
All that glitters...
by Baloney Bill
Review by ß Samantha ß
In affiliation with Inspirational Writers Guild  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Dear Baloney Bill I enjoyed your writing very much.

What I Enjoyed
The pace, tone and vitality are smart and quirky.

Some of My Observations
I got a big jolt from the movement in the poem. “Meteoric Minute” coupled with “Shimmered and Glimmered” are rich in feeling and quicken the pulse nicely.

Inspirational Thought
There is a great contrast between where my wealth comes from and its actual appearance. But the soul of your poem is the search for that which blasts us past the restraints of bed and breakfast.

As the wealth dissipates the life goes on and in my home away from home I feel no loss or gain, but a fun adventure that for a moment quickened the pulse. *Smile*


*Flowerw* ) Samantha ( *Flowerw*
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