Greetings, Odessa Molinari smiling! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" .
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
What I Liked
The first thing that stood out, was your dialogue! Very impressive, indeed! I truly enjoyed the sea salt's words along with his toothless grin.
Such a fun piece in less than 300 words! I loved it.
I was so curious about why he ended up with a metal leg after having a wooden leg, that I was totally surprised and amused with the ending.
Paragraph 5: Needs a space before the next paragraph.
The title confused me: Pieces He Ate Does this have to do with the woodpecker pecking at the wooden peg?
Excellent piece! I loved it! Best of luck in the contest!
Have a great day and...
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
| You responded to this review 04/09/2020 @ 10:13am EDT