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Hi Cat, Linda here. I come in peace *BigSmile*

First Impression:
This is sooo gooood! I still haven’t got around to reading the first part of this story but if it is as good as this and the first one, I can’t wait to read it. The way you wove her endometriosis combined with the many hardships she’s facing was painfully beautiful. She is hurting, but mistrustful. She wants someone to be there for her, but she pushes them all away because well, aren’t they all the same? Ahh it’s great!

None! This is great just as it is :)

Overall Impression:
I loved this story. Wonderfully written, raw, and heartbreaking. It hits all the right notes for a story like this, and it’s all because you’re awesome skills with a pen.

Keep writing!

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