Hi Monty, I'm in the group called Angel Army and I'm going to read your item.

First: It sounds like the boy was playing on the ice where the water was frozen. it seems to me, the ice started breaking and the boy couldn't get out of the water. That sounds pretty scary especially for a small boy. At the bottom of the poem, it states, it was you who got saved by an angel as you were getting out of the water. I'm glad you were okay from that day.

Thank you and I enjoyed reading this poem.
Beacon