Hi there, I am with the Angel Army Group and I'm going to review your item.

Okay, I read this story long time ago and I forgot to review it, so I'm back to do that now. I liked the short story and it really grabbed me at the first start of the story. As I was reading it, I got hooked in when I got to the half way point of the story. One night, my daughter came to me and she startled me as I was reading your short story. So it was great. I didn't see any grammatical errors.

Thank you for sharing,
Beacon