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 You Never Walk Alone Open in new Window. [E]
A poem to remind you that you are not alone in whatever you do.
by Aubrey's Play Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.

*Reading* THE POEM

A heartfelt, inspirational poem that reminds the reader that you are never alone.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. There was a rhythmic flow that I experienced when I read the poem.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. The 1st and 3rd stanza of each line stanza rythmed.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. Punctuation was light, but appropriate. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked the opening line: "You are not alone, you never walk alone." Right away it sets a tone for the poem which is hopeful and upbeat.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I liked how the poem came full circle using a nature motif. The wind offers whispers for us -- we cannot be afraid to listen. Great expression!

Reviewed by StephB for the the Angel Army

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