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 The End Open in new Window. [E]
What gives life meaning?. Death.
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Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.

*Reading* THE POEM

A look at death and a comparison of reading a good book, having a good end.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the comparison and how the poem compared life/death to reading a book.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There were no rhymes.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. If anything, I might suggest a light edit for puncutation to assist the flow of the poem. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "a young rose blooms then deteriorates."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. Nice expression.

Reviewed by StephB for the the Angel Army

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