My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem tells the story of Sept. 11th and asks all to Never Forget.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the use of the repeating stanza that started with, "Lord please don't let this old word forget..."

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There is a AABB rythme scheme in all the stanzas.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a light edit for punctuation to assist with the natural flow of the poem. The poem is easy to read. One additional note: I would use terrorists' which is plural. terrorist's is single use.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "heroes can see past the terrorists' game"

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mention above. Good expression that evokes an emotional response from the reader.