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The Snow Queen Open in new Window. [ASR]
Alone, she walks...alone, she sleeps.
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Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Challenge SEP 2020.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem is about a snow/winter queen who rules over a barren land.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poem framed the life of the queen.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem with no specific rythme scheme, but there are rythmes.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "the dusty field, the muddy road, that garden had once been hoed." It paints a vivid scene in my mind as a reader.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Nice expression. I like the poem challenges the reader to think about the life the snow/winter queen led and fill in the blanks. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the the Angel Army

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