My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this item for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem touches on the sadness of losing a loved one.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. There was a rhythmic flow that I experienced when I read the poem.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There was an ABAB rythme scheme in the stanzas.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "The taste of falling rain, still lingers on my lips." It's a haunting description; well done!

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The first and last stanza repeats, giving the poem the feeling of returning full circle. I have no suggestions for improvement.