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Review of A3. Drink Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hallo!
This one showed up on 'Random Reads'. The title and brief description work. I'm guessing 'A3' refers to 'Assignment 3' ... ? You might want to pick a couple more genres and add a cover photo. A photo of the drink, perhaps. For the 'look' of the recipe, you might consider adding WritingML like font, size, line-spacing and maybe color.

I was trying to imagine this as I went along, and I think the recipe would mostly work, except that I' not too much of a fan of fizzy drinks. (But then that's a personal opinion.) It sounds like the taste would be an interesting mix. I appreciate the warning that it might turn out too sweet.

I would have liked to see some instructions about what to use to create and serve the drink, in terms of bowl, jug, tall glass and so on. Since the ice-cream has been smoothed – further ice to be added? A twist of lime on the glass?

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