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 This One's For ...  [18+]
A small way to encourage love of self.
by pwkom04
Review by jaya
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Mia,
This prose poem exposing the lives of those who fall prey to evil due to circumstances, has appeal. Nobody can escape from harsh realities and unpalatable ways of life.

Yet, as you state, there comes a time, when these rough methods to live could be abandoned. With the help some serious soul-searching and the feeling of love and self examination, life can change for better.

The last three lines suggest a commendable means to be released from the torturous paths of life.

“This is for all of us….”

Write on!
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