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What brought Hoovsie/tHing meandering or prowling in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*You had mentioned writing for the Chapter 1 activity in our campfire, so I came to read and send a review!

What does hoovsie/sometimes tHiNg think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how much magic that bake shop had and how it transformed things. I like how the powers came about gradually after people and animals ate the cake!

You developed the characters well and I was intrigued by the sisters and the powers they had shown already. It seemed like the new magic enhanced what was already lurking there.

What does hooves moo and tHiNg applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the idea of a unicorn and rabbit again, Phoenix and Muffin this time. They are good characters to have magic powers I think!

Well done! I enjoyed reading your story very much! *Heartp**Rabbit3**Unicorn2**Heartv*

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

Maybe Making a Difference (you tell me?) One Review at a Time in 2021! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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